Thursday, November 1, 2018
Comic
this is my chapter chat the comic is about one dinner i had beans that i had to eat but i hate beans so i hide them my dad finds them and gets angry. no beams were harmed in the making of this comic
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Hi Daniel I could really picture what you were writing about. Thanks for adding a bit of humor. Next time add a bit more detail on your people and make your writing a bit clearer. is comics one of your favourite types of writing?
ReplyDeleteHi Daniel, its Mia here, I like how you divided your comic sections. I had some trouble reading it because you had no capital letters and punctuation in your work. What don't you like about beans?
ReplyDeletegood work on the comic i could not read the last part.
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